小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend,her name is zhaoliang.she is a preety gilr with a pair of glasses.her complexsion looks like baby-smooth and her hair is long . she have a good temper and never angry with anybody.her smile always sunny and tender.she give me much helps in my study and life.I love my friend.I hope she will always be happy.