语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句采用很棒;文中的拼写错误有点多。
There are penty of news and reports on the internet today, but not every news or reports is really occured, so, do not give a conclusion as soon as you see something or hear something, you should to inverstigate the turth. We have noticed that the turth alwarys totaly different from your the previous conclusion.
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