句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者能够较恰当地使用高级词汇,可词汇表达不够丰富,有些单词也拼错了。
There are lots of news and reports on the internet today, but not every news or reports is really occurred, so, donot give a conclusion as soon as you see something or hear something, you need to inverstigate the turth. We have noticed that the turth alwarys totaly different from your the previous conclusion.
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