语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;复杂句采用很棒;文章高级词汇表达比较恰当,但词汇量总体较小,有个别拼写错误。
There are lots of news and reports on the internet today, but not every news or reports is really occurred, so, donot give a conclusion as soon as you see something or hear something, you need to investigate the turth. We have noticed that the turth alwarys totaly different from your the previous conclusion.
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