可增加从句的使用量,注意个别的句子错误;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者能较准确地使用高级词汇,词汇表达稍显贫乏,还要重视拼写问题。
There are lots of news and reports on the internet today, but not every news or reports is really occurred. Do not give a conclusion as soon as you see something or hear something, you need to investigate the turth. We have noticed that the turth alwarys totaly different from your the previous conclusion.
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