采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用量不足,应增加从句和复合句的使用;高级词汇表达比较恰当,还要注意积累词汇量。
There are lots of news and reports on the internet today, but not every news or reports is really occurred. Do not give a conclusion as soon as you see something or hear something, you need to investigate the truth. We have noticed that the truth alwarys totally different from your the previous conclusion.
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