2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇，但词汇积累还有很大进步空间；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰。

There are lots of news and reports on the internet today, but not every news or reports is really occurred. Do not give a conclusion as soon as you see something or hear something, you need to investigate the truth. We have noticed that the truth always totally different from your previous conclusion.