文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇使用熟练,但拼写错误要注意。
We have known that investing have risk and how to optimize your investments is very important for every body. There are lots of methods to reduce your investment risk, the key element is don't put all eggs in one basket. For example, you can make money RMB10,000 a month, in which RMB200 be spend on your daily life, the rest of RMB800 is used to investing some value-added fileds. I suggest you to puchase some bank production using of RMB500 and to deposit RMB200 in your bank account, the remining RMB100 could be invested into stock.