小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend i have two girl friend and one boy friend,my girl friend is name xiao hong and xiao fang,boy friend is xiao ming , they all age six old,fang ,hong is very beautiful ,xiao ming draw also very beautiful we are forever best friend,i with best for you xiao ming ,fang ,hong wish to you