小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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My Dog My family have a dog, It name dudu, dudu is nine years old, her very very fat. My fahter and mother all best love dudu ,and me as also, because fahter and mother no home is the dudu and me home,we are as friends, dudu will listen to me say no happy and happy. dudu is my good friend ,I love you to dudu.