作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;作者句法基础较为扎实。
We have known that investing have risk and how to optimize your investments is important. There are lots of methods to reduce your investment risk, avoiding to put all eggs in one basket are the most important of investment. For example, you can make money RMB10,000 a month, in which spend RMB200 on your daily life, the rest of RMB800 is invested to some value-added fields. I suggest you make an appropriate decision on purchase one of bank production using of RMB500 and to deposit RMB200 in your bank account, the remaining RMB100 could be invested into stock.