题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇量较小,单词拼写也要注意;请注意分段。
Computer and Man Nowadays computers pay a impotant part in our daily life.So more and more attention are payed on it .The relationship between computers and man becomes a heated disgussion.Defferent people hold defferent vew. Some people think we are so rely on computers today ,it is not good for us to learn or think for ourseleves .Because when we meet some questions we always look up it on the computer rather than think the answers by ourseleves.