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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了。
We should save money . We should save money not only to be collect money for a rainy day but also to be a clever customer.As customers ,we should always try our best to protect the money in our pockets not robbed by the shopkeepers.There's no doubt that they can earn money but we can use less money if we do something,such as buying things that are on sale or talking to the shopkeeper to get a bargain.At the same time ,we ,students use the money which are earned by our parents from their hard work,so we should learn to save money to loosen their burden.Most of all,saving money which is our Chinese tradition should be passed on by us ,the new generation of our country. Therefor ,from now on ,let's learn to save money.
