文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;结构良好,但是语言不流畅。
We have known that investing have risk and how to optimize your investments is important. Accordingly, there are lots of methods to reduce your investment risk, avoiding to put all eggs in one basket are the most important of investment. Supposing you can make money RMB10,000 a month, in which you have to spend RMB200 on your daily life, the rest of RMB800 is invested to some value-added fields. I suggest you make an appropriate decision on purchase one of bank production by RMB500 and to deposit RMB200 into your bank account, to invest the remaining RMB100 into stock. As a conclusion,