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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10393
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分85.0分
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作者句法基础较为扎实;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确。

用户练习作文:

We have known that investing have risk and how to optimize your investments is important. Accordingly, there are lots of methods to reduce your investment risk, avoiding to put all eggs in one basket are the most important of investment. Supposing you can gain money RMB10,000 a month, in which you must spend RMB200 on your daily life, the rest of RMB800 is invested to some value-added fields. No matter what, I suggest you make an appropriate decision on purchase one of bank production by RMB500 and to deposit RMB200 into your bank account, to invest the remaining RMB100 into stock. In conclusion, investment diversification should be in your heart.

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