作者句法基础较为扎实;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词;文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确。
We have known that investing have risk and how to optimize your investments is important. Accordingly, there are lots of methods to reduce your investment risk, avoiding to put all eggs in one basket are the most important of investment. Supposing you can gain money RMB10,000 a month, in which you must spend RMB200 on your daily life, the rest of RMB800 is invested to some value-added fields. No matter what, I suggest you make an appropriate decision on purchase one of bank production by RMB500 and to deposit RMB200 into your bank account, to invest the remaining RMB100 into stock. In conclusion, investment diversification should be in your heart.