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First We can invest in different asset types, primarily in a portfolio of stocks, bonds and money market investments. The proportion of different types of assets in the portfolio should be determined according to the specific circumstances of different investors. Secondly We can diversify investments in different sectors of the same type of asset. Different industries have different performance on different stages of the business cycle, and their stock price will change accordingly. Financial services, for example, typically develop rapidly early in the recovery phase of the business cycle. Bank stocks usually do better at this time. And mining stocks usually grow faster in the end of the recovery phase of the economic cycle. Third We can invest in different companies in the same industry. Because even an industry is not everyone do the same. There will be some good performance when the company, some companies in another time to develop some faster. Fourth We can spread between different investment management styles. There are two relative investment management styles, one called active, the other called passive. The goal of active management is to obtain more than a specific index or return on performance criteria through the selection of securities and the choice of investment time. Passive investment is not expected to gain more market returns through positive portfolio management. The two most widely recognized passive investment strategies are exponential investment and long term holding after purchase. Fifth Risks can be spread through global investment. An important advantage of global investment is that we can further improve the stability of our return on investment through a wide range of global investment. Because if only in Chinese within the scope of investment, even if we take Shanghai, Shenzhen stocks bought we still have to face a Chinese systemic risk of the stock market, the systemic risk is not through diversification of investments to offset domestic. And this systemic risk can be reduced by diversifying investments globally. Now our China has gradually started QDII, after our investors will have more and more opportunities to spread their investment globally.