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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦165:说出你的烦恼

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:08浏览次数:1926
要求:
最近学校进行了“说出你的烦恼”的调查,请你用英语写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.50%学生认为作业多、压力大;
2.30%的学生认为父母要求严、相互沟通少;
3.20%的学生认为活动少、体质差;
4.说说解决的方法和措施。
要求:
1.句子通顺,表达准确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯;

2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右


Our school has made a survey -----“Don’t keep your worries ”.Here are the results.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework. Theyhave so much homework to do every day. And they feel stressed too much. About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them(in their studies)It’s difficult for them to get along /on well with their parents .The other twenty per cant of them think they are weak in health .They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities.

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