2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;从句数量不足,可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework. Theyhave so much homework to do every day. And they feel stressed too much. About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them(in their studies)It’s difficult for them to get along /on well with their parents .The other twenty per cant of them think they are weak in health .They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities.