内容:本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品,非常感兴趣,请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作,希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1.price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2.establish business relationship建立贸易关系
增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误;语言不流畅。
TO:KPOHsales@hotmail.com FROM:hubin@163.com DEAR SALES: I know that your company new product 5670 held in the exhibition druing 15th~22rd ,August NewYork.And insterested in it. Please send me detil price list and instruction about this product.Thank you very much and hope to establish business relationshipe with us. Looking forward to you reply ! Best wishes HuBin