2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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if you want to breath the flesh air, taste various seafood, and easily translat to Marcao, I recommend Zhuhai what is as beautiful as a peal. Zhuhai located in the south of Guangdong Privance. I think most people have heard this city another name is garden city. this is real garden city, beacuse the climate of Zhuhai is very confortenable heme tropic. whole year average temperturn about 28 degree. many island sarround the city, so you can taste specific seafoods and dried products such dried fish , dried shrimp, dried oysters...... by 50 minutes to car driving, we can arrived Doumen region, it's the most larger region, contrary by the island, Doumen just sarrond with the fild, plant agrden, and small mountins. besides seafood, here has a plent of flesh fruits. for instead,