增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
To: sales-department@hotmail.com From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: December 23,2008 Dear Mr. Johnson: Our company had already received 3000 packages product of No.35 order from your company. but according to our singing of the No.35 order, the number of product should be 3500 package,we still not received remainding 500 package up to now.please kindly check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Best Wishes Wang Haiyang