作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
To: sales-department@hotmail.com From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: December 23,2008 Dear Mr. Johnson: Our company had already received 3000 packages product of No.35 order from your company. but according to our singing of the No.35 order, the number of product should be 3500 package,we still not received remaining 500 packages up to now.please kindly check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Best Wishes Wang Haiyang