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To: sales-department@hotmail.com From: wanghaiyang@hotmail.com Date: December 23,2008 Dear Mr. Johnson: Our company had already received 3000 packages product of No.35 orders from your company. but according to our singing of the No.35 orders, the number of product should be 3500 packages,we still not received remaining 500 packages up to now. Please kindly check your product list. We are looking forward to your early reply! Best Wishes Wang Haiyang
