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The beautiful city that I had visited is Yuntai mountain in jiaozuo He Nan province.He Nan province is my hometown and also a ancient city, it have a long history including lots of culture, stories, and famous characters. There are lots of mountains in China, where is it special? Most of mountains when I climbed are similar,but Yuntai mountain was named the five stars level places. Not only it has mountain, but also rivers, waterfalls, grass, bush and so on. When you visited there, you would feel as you were in a image place. Everyone is tired when you climb a mountain, me too. When I arrived the top of Yun tai mountain, I felt I have done it. A ccelebration from my heart lingers my ears. If you visited that place, you would be unforgetable about its scenery.
