2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句使用量不足；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；文章词汇表达丰富，高级词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视。

Agriculture is a important industry in china, overing 3 billions workers. Chinese agriclulter production is number 1 in the whole golbal and the main products are rice, crops and beans. Although the agricultural lands account 10% of the world, it provides grain for 20% population in the world. Rice was planted by Chinese in 7700. Working-hard and creative chinese people have taken various of measuers to enhance the production of grain before the mechain and fertilizer were used. The recent development of Chinese agriculture is promoting the Organic agriculture. Organic agriculture can serve many aspects at the same time, such as food security, citizens health and continuous development.