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Agriculture is an important industry in china, overing 300 million workers. Chinese agriculture production is number 1 in the whole golbal and the main products are rice, crops and beans. Although the agricultural lands account for 10% of the world, it provides grain for 20% population in the world.China’s history of planting rice dates back as early as 7700 B.C. Working-hard and creative chinese people have taken various of measuers to enhance the production of grain before the mechain and fertilizer were used. The recent development of Chinese agriculture is promoting the Organic agriculture. Organic agriculture can serve many aspects at the same time, such as food security, citizens health and continuous development.
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