作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
my friend. i have a friendly friend.She is very pretty and outgoing girl .We are is classmate.We always playing basketball in week.I am very happy to with her.She is a very like smile. The plate more play more fun, more play more want to play, it's no wonder that "with friends to play together true happiness" that sentence would come out, certainly can't help but lonely out watching!