小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

作者词汇基础不错，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；从句数量偏少，且文中有几处句子错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

　　My new friend 　　In this chapter of the novel,Jane met her new friend-Helen.What Helen said really impressed me a lot,driving me think deeply. 　　“Life is too short to hate other people.We all have faults,but when we die,only the pure flame of the spirt will be left.That's why I never think of revenge,I never consider life unfair.I live in calm,looking forward to the end." 　　Honesly speaking,I complained about my life or people around me now and again,wodering why it was always unfair to me.However,think it over,I should't have been so mean.Time flies.We need to expand the width of life instead of wasting time to think about something meaningless.