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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；高级词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒。
so pity in this electronic communication world, some guys eating were looking at his phone to chat with someone, some guys walking were looking at his phone in order to looking for something, some guys communicating with their parents on line were in their home. electronic communication is so cold like ice and no emotion.It cuts face-to-face contact. I hope there are some eager, vigour,face jumping,smiling in someone's face when I am talking to him.
