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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3367
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

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200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分90.0分
评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,we can observe distinctly that the market share owned by domestic car brands has increased a lot,climbing nearly 33% in 2009.Meanwhile,the market percentage of Jananese cars has a dramatic slump,dropping by approximate 10% from 2008 to 2009.In comparison,the share of American cars has remained almost constant. According to the figures which is provided,it is no difficult to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.At the top of the list is the rapid development of the Chinese motor industry.It is reported that many Chinese car brands have not only captured more markets but also made a lot of breakthroughs in technology.Besides,we must admit that home-made cars enjoy an advantage in price so they can be assumed by more consumers.Finally,what is responsible for the situation is that,with the advance of the Chinese society,Chinese consumers have changed their prejudiced outlook on domestic car brands. As discussed above,it is no surprise to see this situation.And I firmly believe that this established trend will continue in the forthcoming years.

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