句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰。
All we know that Chongqing is an ancient civilization, with the development of economy and prosperity of the tourism, it is gaining growing popularity with the Chinese and foreign tourists, In the city, there is beautiful night view, favorable geographic position and pleasant climate. It is so enchanting as to make tourists forget to return. In the first place, Chongqing has an excellent geographical location. It is located in the southwest of China, and it encircled by the two arms of the Yangtze River and Jialing River. So the city has abundant water resource. Because of its mountainous nature Chongqing got a nickname-“city of hills”. And the name known well both in domestic and in overseas .Secondly, the weather is very special in Chongqing. The weather here is changable, and it is also known as “the Foggy City” because of the thick fog. It is also one of the three fire cities. Its seasonal characteristics are apparent. Spring is a season of rebirth and renewal and everywhere full of vitality. In summer, the highest temperature can reach 40 degrees, it is too hot that people cannot go out sometimes. Autumn is a season of falling leaves, the vegetation is high in Chongqing, so the fallen leaves are very common. It is not very cold like northern cities in the winter, people can hardly see snow in Chongqing. In addition to these, Chongqing’s foods are also famous. The majority of people in Chongqing like eating spicy food very much, for instance, the hot pot, duck blood cake, and so on, the food has also become an important symbol of Chongqing. To sum up, Chongqing is an amazing and livable city, it is worth to visit. Moreover, Chongqing is gradually become a commercial center in the Southwest of china, And its development potential is enormous.
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