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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6620
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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How to improve school safety Since 2010, our country is facing a large amount of campus violence. Pratically all the students who had been victims before that had left a terrible memory about their school life. Consequently, to tackle the issue, what should we do? To start with, I hold the view that we all ought to protect ourselves carefully. Do not be a person that everyone hates, or else you were likely to be attacked by them. Nevertheless, it is important to improve the campus' safety system. The leaders of the school must hire more security guards so that the students could live in a safe environment.

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