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字数:300 满分:100分
从句数量偏少;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,同时能较准确地使用高级词汇。
"Every coin has two sides", There is a remark like this. As a college student, i extremely believe a thing has positive aspects and negative aspects in the same time. We can not judge a thing or a action by ignore the environment. So i hold the opinion that be carefui with your money is right when you are a sthdentes, but different situation should take different solution.