2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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China is an ancient country,which has a long and abundant history.what's more,it has a number of interestingplaces.For instance,The Great Wall,Tiananmen Square，The Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes and so on. Now,I will introduce my hometown,XiAn.As is konwed to all, XiAn is one of the most ancient countries.it is so beautify in my heart,it has not only many interstingplaces,but has some delicous foods.if you visit my hometown, i will take you to Terracotta Army，which is very splendid.The Terra Cotta Warriors is a category of ancient tomb sculpture。it is the symbol of the qin dynasty of prosperous。 I believe you must have a fun time in my town.i’m looking forward to your visit.