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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5945
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Some people think that living in a rural area is better than living in urban area, I absolutely agree with this, because it is lots of benefit to live rural area. First of all, for living in countryside people will gain some benefit that they can not get from urban, such as fresh air, cleaning water and food. For now more and more people move from urban to rural area around city because of the pollution about air, food and sound. The cost of living in rural area is quite cheaper than living in city as well. If you have a farm, it means you do not need spend lots of money to buy vegetable, corn, eventhough cattle. Another benefit is that rural area is more safe than city. There are a veriety of factors of crime in city, theft,drugs, gun for instance. In conclusion, comparing urban area, living in countryside is good for health, it can save your money as well.

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