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若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章词汇表达丰富，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。
Now, with the development of the internet, more and more people start to depend on the internet. So, there are some different views about it. Some think the internet is important and useful. On the one hand, using the internet which can make study and work be more effective. On the other hand, we can know the latest news from all over the world by the internet. But others don't think so. They think the internet is harmful. It makes a bad difference to teenagers. Being infatuated with network games which makes them have less interest in study. I also have some opinions about the internet. I think every coin has two sides. First, it has advantages. we can ues the internent go through information, besides, we can also relax ourselves by the internent to listen to music. But its disadvantages are more. We may do some illegal things by it. So, we should use the internet more rationally.
