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复杂句使用不错，句法规范；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写更认真些。
Tonight,have no intention to see a word,"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."That made me be lost in thought. I always ask myself,what is meaningful life and how to live a meaningful life.I remember another saying"Life is a box of chocolates,you will never know what you gonna get".Is that mean that whatever life do you have or do you get ,it depends on your choice and what you done? Different people have their different life,despite simiilarity,but not the same.Some people want to be a hero,some want to be famous and rich.However,I don't have any ambitions,I just want to be a person who is useful for people. Just like giving homeless a dinner and an overcoat to defence against cold,sending books and other stationeries to children in the mountain area to help them to broaden their horizons. I think that is something outlast life.And only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life.
可可英语 - 划词释义
