文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;复杂句使用不错,句法规范。
Now, with the development of the internet. More and more people prefer to shopping on the internet rather than shopping in the market, which has become a fashion. Every coin has two sides. Shopping on the internet also has advantages and disadvantages, On the one hand, I think shop on the internet is so convenient that can save time which makes people has more time to do other things. On the other hand, goods on the internet are more plentiful. However, it also has bad differences. The goods' quality doesn't ensure. Besides, The price can't bargain which makes the price is higher than market. In a word, I think we have to be always on the alert when we shop on the internet.