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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9562
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中词汇使用较丰富,高级词汇使用要加强;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词。

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Now, with the development of the internet. More and more people prefer shopping on the internet rather than shopping in the market, which has become a fashion. Every coin has two sides. Shopping on the internet also has advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, I think shop on the internet is so convenient that can save time which makes people have more time to do other things. On the other hand, goods on the internet are more plentiful. However, it also has bad differences. The goods' quality doesn't ensure. Besides, the price can't bargain which makes the price higher than market. In a word, I think we have to be always on the alert when we shop on the internet.

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