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Now, with the development of the internet. More and more people prefer shopping on the internet rather than shopping in the market, which has become a fashion. Every coin has two sides. Shopping on the internet also has advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, I think shop on the internet is so convenient that can save time which makes people have more time to do other things. On the other hand, goods on the internet are more plentiful. However, it also has bad differences. The goods' quality doesn't ensure. Besides, the price can't bargain which makes the price higher than market. In a word, I think we have to be always on the alert when we shop on the internet.