2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；文中有几处拼写错误，应增加高级词汇的使用。

CQ is my hometown,is famous for many kinds of mountains,delicious food and beautiful girls. The first place i will show him is Jinfosan.that's very beautiful,especially in the winter there will be covered by snow,which is something looks pury heaven.Besides,we can do many thing at there,such as,making a snowman,claming moutains and some other things.To enjoy the moment we get toogether. And then,Jiefangbie is also a good choice.That's a lot of peoples'choice,because it's the best developed place and there many delicious food,almostly a great one. In conclusion,there many different interesingplaces,there no need to worry that there is no place to have a fun.