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作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇使用灵活，可是在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。
Human live on Earth with all the other animals and plants. The relationship between us and other creature can be seen as roommates, since we all live on Earth. Consequently, it is important that we can live together equally and peacefully. Conversely, human activities have many nagetive effects on plants and animals, leading to different people's altitudes towards this problem. Some people think that it is too late to do anything to this problem since the problem is already really serious and it would be extremely hard to change the current situation. They might suggest that instead of trying to rescue the situation, wasting lots of maney and time, we should just take it easy and let it go by itself. In comparison, the others may argue that animals and plants are human's friend. Thus, we should try our best to save them to improve this situation. "It's never to late" Nowadays, many countries have laws protecting animals and plants, especially endangered ones. Furthermore, people are taught about the importance of saving the enviroment. These measures are effective on improving this situation. In my opinion, I agree with the people who are trying to do something to this world, because no matter how little things they've done, it would make a big difference to the world.
