高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累高级词汇；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

my hometown. my hometown is the only place that I feel safe. I was born and grow there.nothing can change my love for my hometown. but as you can see things change in my hometown nowdays.we used to help and support each other.and now everything's changed.people respect the rich and look down the poor.money is every thing to them.