2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

从句使用量不足，应增加从句和复合句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇；文中衔接词丰富。

With the raising of the life level, taking vacation plays a more and more important role in the life of Chinese. In the past, the so many time of Chinese were spent on keeping live, that they had less time to go out and take vacations. However, the travel industry has under go a rapid development in recent years. The appearence of boom economy and rich middle rank has agitated an unprecedented hot trend of travel. Chinese not only travel in domestic, but also travel at board and this trend is becomes more and more usual. In the holiday of 10,1,2016, the total of travel consumption were more over 4 billions. According to the WTO, China will become the wold biggest country of travel in 2020 and will become the rapid country of travel spending in the next years.