题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。
what is friend?that is the one we trust to.in our lifes,we trust manny people,our parents,classmates,teaches and the lover.when we stay with this people,we feel safe,calm and relaxed,beacause we believe that these ones would never cheat us,and sometimes they would protect us.however trust must be both sides,or this porsition won't be long. so how to maintain the trust ,we should think about it.first,don't cheat.cheating is the most killer to relation before you and your love.second, do what you have promised.as you have promised to your friends,you have to try your best to finish it.