2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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on maintaining trust nowadays, many people have lost trust to others ,which mainly is due to the social phenomen. a little people would lies to others who is willing to help them , and then to harm them. it is so shocked for and because of this reasons ,many people not trust others.although the people are really need to help . as far as i am concerned, it is only a little people who wants to harm others . we should on maintaining trust.and we would found that it is very wonderful in this world .if we lose trust to others ,ourselves will not have a good mean to live .we will feel so worry about this world ,and it is so bad. in this world ,the majority of people is friendly .we have no need for someone to give up the trust for other people.let's on maintaining trust , we will find that we can have many friendship ,and the happiess is around us .