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With the improvement of the living standards, vacation is playing an increasingly important role in Chinese people’s life. In the past, Chinese people mainly spent their time on earning a living and seldom did they have the opportunities to travel abroad. However, the tourism industry has undergone a rapid development in recent years. The appearance of booming economy and rich middle class have triggered an unprecedented tourism bloom. Chinese not only travel in domestic, but also travel at board and this trend is becomes more and more usual. In the holiday of 10,1,2016, the total of travel consumption were more over 4 billions. According to the WTO, China will become the wold biggest country of travel in 2020 and will become the rapid country of travel spending in the next years.
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