小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强高级词汇的使用。

Zhao guangli is my best friend. She is a beautiful girl. she is twenty eight years old .she was born on Rizhao Shangdong province.She is easy going and honest.we can see each other every weekends. last Sunday we went to go shopping .She bought a beautifu skirt ,she said that she like my skirt. wow, I am so surpised .