小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Zhao guangli is my best friend. She is a beautiful girl. She is twenty eight years old .She was born on Rizhao Shangdong province.She is easy going and honest.we can see each other every weekend. Last Sunday we went to go shopping .She bought a beautiful skirt ,she said that she like my skirt. wow, I am so surpised .