2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段。

With the steady growth of science and technology, an increasing number of people chat with someone on the internet. Above all, we will be nervous at a thought of our children who make friend online. It's not good ideal to do this way that communicates with a stranger that you never get along with him or her in the past. When it comes to safety problem, nobody can predict this condition which someone wants to hurt you without any sign.