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With the steady growth of science and technology, an increasing number of people chat with someone on the internet. Above all, we will be nervous at a thought of our children who make friend online. It's not good ideal to do this way that communicates with a stranger that you never get along with him or her in the past. When it comes to safety problem, nobody can predict this condition which someone wants to hurt you without any sign. On the other hand, if you are a shame person and rarely talk with your family and friends. Even you have no friend. Making friends online is another way that you could open your mind to chat with someone without any consideration. But as a whole, it seems to be obvious that the disadvantages far outweigh advantages.
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