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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;请注意分段。

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With the steady growth of science and technology, an increasing number of people chat with someone on the internet. Above all, we will be nervous at a thought of our children who make friend online. It's not good ideal to do this way that communicates with a stranger that you never get along with him or her in the past. When it comes to safety problem, nobody can predict this condition which someone wants to hurt you without any sign. On the other hand, if you are a shame person and rarely talk with your family and friends. Even you have no friend. Making friends online is another way that you could open your mind to chat with someone without any consideration. But as a whole, it seems to be obvious that the disadvantages far outweigh advantages.

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