小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

Zhao Guangli is my best friend. She is a comely girl. She is twenty eight years old .She was born on Rizhao Shangdong province. She is straightforward. We can see each other on weekends. Last Sunday we went to go shopping. She purchased a beautiful skirt and she said that she like my skirt. I am so surprised.